Friday, June 27, 2008

Chapter 21

It's up, but it's a short, short chapter. It's a little too short for my liking, but I decided to cut out unnecessary paragraphs and details that would just confuse the story anymore than chapter 21 seems confusing. It strikes me as a bit clunky, but I think it'll get a little better. Tomorrow's installment will definately make up for this one.

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