Saturday, June 28, 2008

Chapter 22 is up

The language is a little mordern, I'll admit. Pandora is a bit more chatty than usual, I admit, but I liked the chapter over all and one turn of phrase changed would change the way the whole conversation could go. I'm only so talented. I'll try again later when the story has progressed more. The chapter is basically to give you information and show you what Pandora hides from everyone including herself.

I hope you enjoy.

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