My first review did not go well. The reviewer liked the dragons and nothing else it seems. I can live with that. I can't defend myself on much of it. I am having problems telling instead of showing. I did not agree with the comments about the commas missing. Just because your mind puts a pause there does not mean a comma goes there. I got in trouble in college because of comma splices all the time and I learned pretty much where they should and should not go. Other than that, I can't say anything else. It hurt a bit that the person who read it didn't really like it, but what can you do?
All I can say is thank you for taking the time to write the review, and I will try to do a better job at showing than telling.
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